Brush my worries past
Present moment, not to last
Future, pearly fast
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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The First Hairline Cracks
The first cracks never look like cracks. They don’t arrive with drama or warning. They don’t announce themselves as danger. They hide inside the very things that feel like power — speed, clarity, momentum, capability. That’s why they’re so easy to miss. That’s why they’re so dangerous.
By Elisa Wontorcik3 days ago in Poets
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This is brilliant! clever play on tenses and teeth. Who knew dental care could be this poetic? Lol
Oh, I like this one! 🪥
Nice toothbrush 😁 great haiku