I want your tender kiss.
I want to feel the taste of love upon my lips.
You feel so strong and powerful, and you make me feel like I am on a desert island with just you and the sunset and spray of ocean mist on our face.
As the shadows of the sun settle behind the vanish point of the ocean, we hold each other close as we run down the beach making wet footprints in the sand.
In the darkness, we lie stunned by the beauty of Venus, the Goddess of love.
We pray to her, wishing of being together forever.
But can the power of love defeat what hounds the past?
The past of which we chose the wrong path and ended up wretched and confused.
Yet somehow faced the sorrow and went on living by love.
We shall one day be together in Heaven where can be angels of love that only play their harps when a young couple falls in love by sharing one kiss.
We are the angels of mercy that began with the loss of innocence on the blanket, under the stars, facing the ocean, on the desert island of love
It might be a dream, but do you feel this good?
About the Creator
Laci Nowlin
My name is Laci. I am a 39 year old server from Texas. I have been writing poetry since I was about 15. I am a mom of three and a lover of adventure. I hope you enjoy my poetry and I’m always up for constructive criticism. Enjoy! 🌻❤️
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This is so beautiful ❤️
Outstanding! Such a beautiful use of words to convey the feelings of love. Perfect use of imagery also!