I want your tender kiss.
I want to feel the taste of love upon my lips.
You feel so strong and powerful, and you make me feel like I am on a desert island with just you and the sunset and spray of ocean mist on our face.
As the shadows of the sun settle behind the vanish point of the ocean, we hold each other close as we run down the beach making wet footprints in the sand.
In the darkness, we lie stunned by the beauty of Venus, the Goddess of love.
We pray to her, wishing of being together forever.
But can the power of love defeat what hounds the past?
The past of which we chose the wrong path and ended up wretched and confused.
Yet somehow faced the sorrow and went on living by love.
We shall one day be together in Heaven where can be angels of love that only play their harps when a young couple falls in love by sharing one kiss.
We are the angels of mercy that began with the loss of innocence on the blanket, under the stars, facing the ocean, on the desert island of love
It might be a dream, but do you feel this good?
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Laci Nowlin
My name is Laci. I am a 39 year old server from Texas. I have been writing poetry since I was about 15. I am a mom of three and a lover of adventure. I hope you enjoy my poetry and I’m always up for constructive criticism. Enjoy! 🌻❤️
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan6 days ago in Beat
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This is so beautiful ❤️
Outstanding! Such a beautiful use of words to convey the feelings of love. Perfect use of imagery also!