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He pressed the barrel to his forehead
With her kiss still tempting his mind
Cold steel pressed against his scalp
The heavy weight in hand
Lingered thoughts in mind
He hears her voice
Still screaming
One word
Die
About the Creator
Gunnar Anderson
Author of The Diary of Sarah Jane and The Diary of Sarah Jane: Between the Lines. Has a bachelor's degree in English from Arizona State University and currently resides in Phoenix with his wife and daughter who inspire him daily.
Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insight
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters


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Powerful lines
It has a nice flow.