Swimming in tandem,
I love you because you get my random.
We hear the same noise frequencies,
you fill my heart’s previous vacancies.
The way you swim, it’s a dance I flow with,
time is golden and shines like a gift.
We play with words and sunshine,
all of it together, it’s simply divine!
The brush of your fin,
I always wish to feel again,
it tickles me pink,
and causes me to think,
how was I living before you?
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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"The brush of your fin, I always wish to feel again," soo cute ✨🦋 I loved it, it's simply a cute poem <3
I love this… the photo is really lovely too . Great job! 😊