Swimming in the pool of despair!
"broken within"
I've been walking in the dark.
I've been feeling puzzled.
I've drowned forever in my own tears.
I have tried countless times to discover my true self.
I felt like I'd lost my mind.
I felt like I was swimming in a pool of despair.
As if I've drowned deep inside the water.
A dark cloud appeared to be hovering around me.
My thoughts were gone, and I was broken within.
Only my mind was invisible.
Questions without answers.
Nonetheless, I kept the faith.
I hoped to be a better version of myself tomorrow.
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I'm sorry my dear. We all go through our dark moments. But we also reach the end of the tunnel too and see the light. There's always a brighter day. Always. Keep the faith. God is not finished with you yet. I believe that. 🙏❤️
This was so poignant and the ending was hopeful. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️ Loved your poem!