Swimming Against the Tide
An aquatic villanelle poem
We cannot save the sea—
but perhaps oceans might start to heal
without humanity.
*
Pollution spreads dreadfully,
ice caps melt daily. Often, I feel
we cannot save the sea
*
until consensus. We see
global recovery as piecemeal
without humanity
*
taking responsibility
for our past carnage. It seems surreal
we cannot save the sea.
*
Folks mouth slogans ’bout being free
although it’s a political spiel,
without humanity
*
caring about what we
lose in this backroom deal.
We cannot save the sea
without humanity.
About the Creator
Alison McBain
Alison McBain writes fiction & poetry, edits & reviews books, and pens a webcomic called “Toddler Times.” In her free time, she drinks gallons of coffee & pretends to be a pool shark at her local pub. More: http://www.alisonmcbain.com/
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Comments (13)
Great poem about saving our planet. Love it 😍
Congratulations on placing! Love the eye-opening message here! Thank you!
Congratulations on placing!
Refreshingly different in its style and speaks a powerful message! Well done, and congratulations on placing!
Congrats! A deserving topic for a powerful poem.
Back to say well done on placing, Alison!
Amazing
Congratulations! The sea is our life and became red from our signs,Nice job.
Outstanding! Keep striving for greatness—congratulations!❤️❤️
This is so well done. Congratulations on top!❤
This was stunning, Alison. Seriously well done. The lines are so tight and succinct and because of that the message is so impactful. Loved this and worried now lol...this is a great entry. Well done on Top Story too!
We need the sea just like it needs us, I suppose. Circle of life. Lovely poem.
It is sad how terribly the world is treated, and there are so many who don't see or care or want to hear about it. Thank you for advocating.