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Sweet Smooth Drunken sounds

Music when tipsy

By Some GuyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
https://ggie.berkeley.edu/practice/listening-to-music-mindfully/

The lights are somehow, in their own way, dark

Am I eleven sambuca shots deep?

Now there is nothing rotten in Denmark

Putting of my inevitable sleep

So forgone the sad songs do make me weep

Hearing those sweet smooth voices in my ears

Just one sound and my past there is a peep

My comfort through tears, my fears and the years

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About the Creator

Some Guy

I kinda suck at writing but I enjoy it

Anyway, here's a dumb little haiku:

The gunslinger draws

His opponent does the same

oh dear, they both died

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was just so deep! Especially the first line!

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