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Sweet Sixteen

For Bonn

By Mother CombsPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Today you are Sixteen

yesterday you were fifteen

to me, it seems like you were just born

between you and your sister, my love is torn.

The day I first held you

How tall you would be I had no clue

Your smile has always won my heart

It's like you have mastered a hidden art

You don't know how beautiful you are

You are my Superstar

I know you can not see it

but your look is unique you must admit

I know no one as brave

There's no animal you would not save

You have the kindest heart

Plus you are pretty darn smart

So today I wish you a wonderful Sweet Sixteen Birthday

While I remind you that I love you just as much every Unbirthday

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Leslie Writes2 years ago

    She sounds like a lovely young lady. She is also lucky to have someone like you to pen such a thoughtful poem for her birthday <3

  • This is really beautiful. I really enjoyed reading it. I would have to say this is one of your best poems. I'm certain your daughter must have loved it.

  • Test2 years ago

    This is just all kinds of lovely! 🤍 Such a sweet sentiment!

  • Happy Belated Sweet Sixteen to Bonn! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

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