Sweet and Sour
A Pair of Keets in Love
By ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)Published about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Jonah Pettrich on Unsplash
You so sweet
You so sour
Your delightful beak I'll devour
WAIT! Is that your tongue? Did you just eat sunflower seeds?
You know I'm allergic! Where's my Epi-pen?
Sweetie? My asthma!
I gotcha my rosy cheeked darlin'! Inhale! And again!
Damn. I love you.
Birds of a feather
Shucks...
About the Creator
ROCK aka Andrea Polla (Simmons)
~ American feminist living in Sweden ~ SHE/Her
Admin. Vocal Social Society
Find me: @andreapolla63.bsky.social
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Comments (6)
🤣🤣🤣 true love in flight! 🥰
Hahahahahah the Epipen to the rescue! Loved this!
neat, tight and cute! +Parrots! https://youtu.be/DZElbix-nf4?si=Hcw68Zqb2Dfe4nAM
Don't always flock together. Sometimes they just nestle.
This is the most chaotic, life-threatening, and love-filled poem I've ever read—absolute gold! From romance to near-death to "birds of a feather" in record time. If love isn't a rollercoaster like this, I don’t want it!
That's so stinkin cute and sweet, love this