
"Focus on the journey, not the destination."
What terrible, foolish advice
If you do not think carefully about the destination
Where is the journey headed? What defines it?
The end of the narrative shapes its meaning decisively
Aren't we always desperate to know how the story ends?
Doesn't the final episode get the highest ratings?
Should we skip to it?
Of course not
But everything that leads to it
Will reveal itself to us in a radically fresh way
Once we know how it ends
That heroine will be slain by a jilted lover
That hero will perish at the hands of a traitor
They will probably turn out to be siblings
The game ends in crying
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We know that death is the end
For all of us
For every, mortal story
And yet
We are encouraged to concentrate on the journey
To move on, heedless of imminent oblivion
To pick up the pace, actually
To confuse distraction with action
Isn't everyone busy to the point of exhaustion?
Why is that accepted as a given?
Why is it celebrated as some sort of achievement?
We should not patiently endure indignities
When it is so obvious that our tomorrows
Are not renewable
We have the means, for now
To alter how things are
Not just for our own sake
But for the sake of any mortal
Who might turn up here
And struggle to survive
Until the end
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.



Comments (6)
I often find myself questioning the notion of striving i life, materially, careerwise, wasting our youthful vigour and health on work for a retirement we cant afford financially or physically! well wrought, sir!
☺️ Enjoyed the ideas here D.J! Did you feel emancipated after your free verse?
This is some wonderful food for thought. "We should not patiently endure indignities When it is so obvious that our tomorrows Are not renewable." Well said!
Very poignant!
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"The end of the narrative shapes its meaning decisively" so well said! Something so many people and even writers of today's TV and Films seem to have overlooked.
So true! I feel like we have to embrace the joy in dichotomies and nuance, that it is both the journey and the destination