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Swallowed Sun

Total eclipse

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Swallowed Sun

A hush drapes over midday’s glow,

shadow creeping, measured, slow.

The sun once fierce,

once bright, once whole,

wanes beneath the moon’s control.

Gold turns ashen, dim and frail,

a phantom ring, a silent veil.

Daylight falters, cold and thin,

as darkness dares to step within.

A breathless world, a frozen tide,

eyes uplifted, arms spread wide.

Yet light, though stolen, waits its turn

a smoldering ember set to burn.

A Swallowed Sun.

A hush drapes over midday’s glow,

shadow creeping, measured, slow.

The sun once fierce,

once bright, once whole

wanes beneath the moon’s control.

Gold turns ashen, dim and frail,

a phantom ring, a silent veil.

Daylight falters, cold and thin,

as darkness dares to step within.

A breathless world, a frozen tide,

eyes uplifted, arms spread wide.

No hand can halt the turning sphere,

the dark will pass, but leave its smear.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    What a way to describe an eclipse. Good job.

  • Very good work 👏

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