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Surrender

Sky-ku

By Teresa RentonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Surrender
Photo by Jacob Dyer on Unsplash

Sometimes you’re so black

Only your moon mouth opens,

grins, swallows me whole.

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Thank you for spending a moment with my words. If you like the way I play with letters from the alphabet, I would be honoured to have you as my guest, on my profile, where you can read whatever takes your fancy. If you’d like to read more haiku they’re all here:

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Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    There you go again, blowing us all out of the water...or in this case, the sky. That was incredible!

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