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Sunset

8/17/2025

By Ellie HoovsPublished 5 months ago 1 min read
Sunset
Photo by Igor Kasalovic on Unsplash

Summer blooms

faux tangerine

promises of autumn

in boxes

You blistered me

with your heat

said it was enough

I should just...

feel the love

since it was 98 degrees.

Peel away the pith of me

I am still bittersweet

been trying to romance

the stones of men

since I was thirteen

No wonder I fell for

your granite.

If you were nicotine

maybe I could snuff you out.

Why did I settle

for the foundation

of a house.

You said I was enough

but I was floor board

creaking under your weight

just a clementine sky

hell bent on believing

in the travertine

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About the Creator

Ellie Hoovs

Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.

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  • Calvin London5 months ago

    Very nice, Ellie. Deep sentiment expressed well

  • verse voyager5 months ago

    this is a great piece...loved it

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