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sunlight to moonlight,
from light of day to nightβs dark,
dreaming in the park!!
Thank you for reading ππ
About the Creator
Moe Radosevich
I am always touched when something I write touches another so if any of you my fellow creators have been touched thank you
Write on my friends
Sure would appreciate more reads and maybe some tips or pledges thank you



Comments (22)
Simple and Genial ! Congratulations on Top story :) !
Love the image and the words
Oh, to be dreaming in the park under the moonlight π. Lovely writing, Moe.
Great entry for the challenge Moe. Congrats on top story.
Congratulations! on the Top Story
simply beautiful and congratulations to TS
well done
This short piece is simple yet impactful, capturing the transition from day to night in a poetic and charming way. The contrast between sunlight and moonlight evokes a peaceful, dreamlike atmosphere, and the playful exclamation at the end adds a sense of joy and whimsy. Itβs a lovely, compact reflection on natureβs daily rhythm, leaving the reader with a feeling of calm and wonder. Well done!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
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Back to say 'congratulations' on the Top Story achievement with this amazing poetry!
So beautiful! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece!
Congrats on the top, Moe!! ππ½
This is lovely. Congrats on the TS.
Oh, so gorgeous, Moe! π€
I have recommended this as a Top Story in this week's "Raise Your Voice" here https://shopping-feedback.today/resources/raise-your-voice-thread-10-17-2024%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Lovely haiku, Moe! Made me think of walking through Central Park at twilight.
NIce haiku, buddy! It's a little chilly for dreaming in the park today.
Love the image and the words
Hehehehehe dreaming in the parl sounds nice. Loved your poem!
A sweet haiku, Moe.
Sweet and simplistically, altruistically lovely.