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Sun Veils

Sky-ku

By Andrea Corwin Published about a year ago 1 min read
© Andrea O. Corwin

Sun rays low in sky

transform swirling threads into

rose and melon veils

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Copyright © 10/25/2024 by Andrea O. Corwin

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Andrea Corwin

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Poetry, fiction, horror, life experiences, and author photos. Written without A.I. © Andrea O. Corwin

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  • Poppy about a year ago

    That is some stunning imagery!

  • Testabout a year ago

    gives more insight on nature and beautiful it is well done👌

  • Lana V Lynxabout a year ago

    Great verse, Andrea, and great to see you back on Vocal!

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    rose and melon veils. -- Well done. I am subscribing to you.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    That is so pretty. Well done.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    The color imagery in that last line is absolutely superb! Beautiful work, Andrea!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Perfect imagery of the evening sky. Good work.

  • Lovely to read this on my very foggy, grey morning in Sweden: pretty!

  • Oooo, rose and melon veils, I especially loved that!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    "rose and melon veils" is a lovely description.

  • Michelle Liew Tsui-Linabout a year ago

    Hi again, Andrea! A perfect sunset Haiku there!

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