With the sun in my eyes, I'm inspired.
I make a try to change the world;
I make a book to alter it all.
With the sun in my eyes, I feel better;
not sick, like I was before;
not tired, like I have been.
With the sun in my eyes, everything's OK.
Beams shine from the window,
shine down into my eyes.
With the sun in my eyes, everything turns around.
Stories come to life,
characters live in fields of flowers.
With the sun in my eyes, I'm alright.
I could do anything;
I could sing and shout and leap.
With the sun in my eyes, I'm inspired:
Tomorrow, I say, I'll write the book-
the one that'll change the world.
About the Creator
Chloe
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ahoy!
inactive.
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