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Sun in the Eyes

A Short Story

By ChloePublished 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Sun in the Eyes
Photo by Thanos Pal on Unsplash

With the sun in my eyes, I'm inspired.

I make a try to change the world;

I make a book to alter it all.

With the sun in my eyes, I feel better;

not sick, like I was before;

not tired, like I have been.

With the sun in my eyes, everything's OK.

Beams shine from the window,

shine down into my eyes.

With the sun in my eyes, everything turns around.

Stories come to life,

characters live in fields of flowers.

With the sun in my eyes, I'm alright.

I could do anything;

I could sing and shout and leap.

With the sun in my eyes, I'm inspired:

Tomorrow, I say, I'll write the book-

the one that'll change the world.

inspirational

About the Creator

Chloe

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ahoy!

inactive.

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  • Bren3 years ago

    Everything is fine, just need a bit of the sun to shine! I like it! https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/suns-got-my-back%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

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