Because it is my 28th Birthday, I'm releasing this special poem into the world♥️
(Softly sexual)
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Your eyes are the sun
Mine are the moon
I am ignited
You throw fuel on the flames
You are more than a desire
I crave your tender lips
Making their way down
I yearn for your grip
Your hands on my hips
When you slide into me
While looking in my eyes
I lose track of time
My heart beats for you
As the rest of the world fades away
I want to taste
Every bit of you
To know your thoughts
And your dreams
I could listen to you for hours
And still hang on every word
Take my hand
Pull me close
Sit with me
Share your secrets
I'll tell you all of mine
This life is what we make it
Together, intertwined 💞
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
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Such a beautiful and intimate piece. A perfect way to celebrate your birthday and share a little piece of your heart with the world.
Happy belated Birthday Tanya 🥳 🎈 🎂 🌶️ Ooo softly sexual. I didn't see that coming, but boy am I excited! - more than a desire. That line made it sound so powerful. 🌶️ 'Grip' damn 👌🏾many ways this could be translated into the mind. - ' I want to taste every bit of you' sounds like a lucky guy 🌶️ 'To know your thoughts and your dreams' I love this. Because this is what makes S** out of this world, with said person. The fact that you understood this and could mirror the sentiment and the magic, through your poem, was fantastic. 🌶️ Together intertwined. Love this. That is how it should be. Love the rhythm this made near the end. 🤗❤️🖤👌🏾