Pillow kisses in deep dew drop grass
Laughing at this crazy world together
In a dank, blowing dandelion breeze
And believing, like kids, in living forever
Dancing in the sun, or in the rain
We never changed with the weather
It was you and me
And it always would be
Branches and grass blades sway, so do I
In the forceful wind of you
Your touch, the lips and fingertips of the sun
Burn me up, cooked and happy
Monday or Sunday
Drought or reverie
It is you
With all the promise of a summer sky
I promise I’ll shine
And I’ll rain for you, too
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Jack Friend
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"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan7 days ago in Beat
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Keep up the good work.
Powerful lines, nice work