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Summer's Promise

A Poem of Enduring Affection.

By Quincy.VPublished 3 years ago โ€ข 1 min read

A gift arrived, a package from afar

It traveled through space, a soldier's memoir

A surprise that brought tears to my eyes

A treasure from dad, a true surprise

He's out there fighting for what's right

A brave soldier, with all his might

My heart swells with pride and love

A father I cherish, sent from above

Inside the box, a picture of us

Smiling and happy, no hint of fuss

A necklace too, with a golden heart

A symbol of love, never to part

The tears flow freely, down my cheek

Grateful for the gift, words can't speak

Thankful for a father, so brave and true

The love he shows, through and through

This gift means more, than words can say

A soldier's love, never fades away

I wear the necklace, close to my heart

A constant reminder, we're never apart

So here's to my father, a soldier so brave

Sending love and thanks, beyond the grave

I'll treasure this gift, forevermore

A reminder of love, to my very core.

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To all who have read this poem, My heartfelt gratitude I now show. You've taken the time to journey along, To feel the emotions that I have drawn. Your eyes have witnessed the words I've penned, Your hearts have felt the message I send. You've allowed my voice to be heard, My thoughts and feelings, now unblurred. Your presence here has made it worthwhile, Your time and attention, both versatile. So thank you, readers, for your kind regard, For sharing this moment, in unison, we applaud.

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Quincy.V

My blog is a space where I share tips, insights, and inspiration related to the topic, with the goal of helping my readers improve their area of interest.

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  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    I miss you Quincy. Been a while. Find comfort in hearts filled with love sending you hugs from arms open wide. From a fellow military family member. ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’›๐Ÿ’“๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’œ. Blessings and hearts.

  • I loved this poem. I'm sorry for your loss. I'm glad you have a something to still feel his love

  • Test3 years ago

    This was really beautiful, heartfelt and emotional for me! You've out done yourself Quincy! ๐Ÿ’œ

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