SUMMER
Adventures lead to New Discoveries😉🌈that Gives Growth-
Really Getting the Chance
To Relax-
I have to say that I like that.
On a Summer day
Chilling
While I'm Getting
Paid…
I like that,
Just let me
Relax…
Last Summer ☀️ I was Running 🏃
Up the Mountain
For a Movie 🎬
Although I wasn't The Star 🌟of the Show-
The opportunity helped me Grow…💯
This Summer 😎
I get to chill and watch the movie 🎬 💥
No Flashing Lights,
But It's Still a Delight!
Summer exists to Unwind -
Summer exists to encounter a New Growth…
My Summer 💪 was an Adventure,
A positive Rodeo 👌
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH6 days ago in Critique
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Are we allowed to know which movie you were in yet?
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Nice work! I'm proud of you & your accomplishments! Summer is such a fun time of the year! 😊
This was such a fun and wonderful poem! Awesome work!
Nice, sounds like it was a fun and rewarding experience. Love the sunshine of your poem!
great poem
So happy you had a fun summer !!!🎉💗
Glad you’re having a great summer. Loved the poem!
It’s so cool that you were in a movie! I was waiting to see if you’d write a poem about it. Nicely done! Can’t wait to see you on screen! 👏
Wow, lots of great lines in this poetry 🤩🤩🤩🤩
Loved this! ❤️❤️❤️🥹