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Suitcases Packed in the Hall

It’s over your wifeless homeless and broke with a fish

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

Suitcases Packed in the Hall

Suitcases packed in the hall,

just a note—no need to call.

I’ve left you here, I’ve shut the door,

this house is ours no more.

Homeless now, wifeless too,

bank account? Emptied through.

I’ll think of you in your new slum,

with her beside you—have some fun.

Good luck, goodbye, no tears to shed,

I took the dog—he’d end up dead.

Your goldfish waits, no love to spare,

downstairs, beside your case, right there.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is a humorous poem over what must have been something nasty. Good job.

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