Subtle Karma
Anxiety of waiting
Photo by Drew Dizzy Graham on Unsplash
Once upon a time
A king betrayed his queen
Now sleeps eyes open
About the Creator
C. H. Richard
My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged
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Comments (36)
Wonderful ending poem 👌
super
So much said in so few words. I guess that reflects what life does to us all. I enjoyed the read.
Perfection. Well done, and I enjoyed the read.
Well done. So much with so little.
Amazing story
Thank you for taking the time to share your story. Your words and experiences are valuable and appreciated.
Clever😆😉Congratulations🎉🎉🎉💕💜🥹💯
Interesting
Congrats on Top Story, Cindy! I love this one so much. :)
Very clever & well written! Congrats! 😊
Or rather sleeps with one eye open 💡
Loved this! Congrats on Top Story!
Yay, congrats Cindy on a well-deserved Top Story! So happy for you!
Interesting haiku!
My neighbor has a dog. She called it Karma. I asked why. She said, "Karma's a bitch". I do not sleep well now. 😳👍🏽
Excellent job!
Congratulations! I’m so happy to see this one here!
Ah that Karma!! Loved the way this unfolded, wonderful. Congratulations on Top Story!!
Excellent! Congratulations on top story!!
yay. Congrats on the Top Story.
Oof! Karma is a bitch. Congratulations on your Top Story! 🤗
Congratulations on your Top Story
Powerful words so much said in so few!! :) Congratulations 👏
Nicely written. Good job!!!