The photo captures two squirrels peering out from a hole in a tree trunk, as if they were curious about the world around them.
Sally saw some silly squirrels,
Skipping swiftly, squirting swirls,
Suddenly, she started to sing,
Softly, sweetly, such simple thing.
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Silly squirrels stopped and stared,
Sally's song sounded so rare,
Satisfied, she smiled with glee,
Squirrels scampered up a tree.
***
So simple, a story to tell,
Starting with a single sound so swell,
Satisfying to see it through,
Sayonara, until next rendezvous.
-Adan
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Nice poem. Well done.