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Strength in Subtlety

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By Rikki SodayePublished 5 years ago 1 min read

You’re a volcano.

Violent red shrieks,

Demanding, aggressive strides,

Breaking burning, rampaging over

My dull, placid life

You’re a volcano

And I’m just smoke.

My grey disposition,

A mist filled mystical appearance,

A life that Somehow yet alludes to something greater still

something...more red.

And when they see me

They scatter in fear!

At first

Because I’m not a volcano

I’m just smoke.

And eventually even a light breeze

Is enough to billow me over,

Is enough to bow me through

Or apart, Or away.

I forget

No, am forgotten, often

You’re a volcano.

Red glowing rocks

Shooting every which way

Like a thousand wishing stars

Giving you...anything

And yet you wished...

Only to be like me.

Boring, gray smoke

Only shocking till you see

Right through me

But you said

What power

What power to whisper gently

Like a breeze, like a casual whispery wind

And cause...stampedes!

What power in subtlety

How my world changed that day

inspirational

About the Creator

Rikki Sodaye

I love writing, always have. I believe people are born poets, and even if they never write a single word, their whole life breeds poetry.

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