Stream of Consciousness
Day Dream
Maybe my daydream
is my muse, maybe
my muse is my daydream
how will I know
where one ends and
the other begins
thoughts tangle together
press in with warm
abandon and reckless
depth, diving into
uncharted flights between
real and fantasy
wide asleep
eyes closed wide
in broad daylight
without cover of night
tears afraid
of falling
cling
to my eyelashes
but my daydream
looks into my eyes and sees
forever
my daydream
holds me and feels
two hearts become one
my daydream
kisses me breathless
two souls intertwined
as fruited vines
my daydream
thinks I'm
perfect
in my
daydream.
another world
another lifetime
my daydream
will find me.
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️
You can find me also on Facebook & Messenger and Discord
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Keep reading
More stories from Colleen Walters and writers in Poets and other communities.
Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deeming4 days ago in BookClub
Comments (5)
This poem beautifully captures the blurred lines between reality and imagination, longing and fulfillment. "Thoughts tangle together / press in with warm / abandon and reckless / depth" -- This vividly portrays the immersive power of daydreams. The ending, with its hopeful yearning, leaves a lingering sense of bittersweet beauty.🌞🩶🤎
So beautiful. I love ❤️ “ wide asleep eyes closed wide”
This is so beautiful, tender, and sweet. I also love the song choice! It goes so perfectly with your poem.
Your poem is deeply evocative, blurring the lines between dream and reality with such tenderness. It’s beautifully romantic.
Raw, beautiful and relatable!