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Smooth

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Image by Ingo Jakubke from Pixabay

Satin liquid flowing over lumpy rocks.

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Seamless silver water gracefully flowing oceanward.

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Sleek, glossy liquid within the banks.

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Glassy surface reflecting the surrounding forest.

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Undulating water flows to smoother surfaces.

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Sinuously moving along like a snake.

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About the Creator

Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Beautiful piece.

  • Oooo, satin, glossy, glassy, sinuously! That was soooo smooth! Loved your poem!

  • Very smooth💗💖

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I got the snaky vibes from the beginning. Nice. I have a boa in one of mine. Thay are smooth creatures.

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    Very smooth vibes.

  • Grz Colm2 years ago

    Great idea for a flowing river! Smooth peaceful and meditative! ☺️👍

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