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Stoking The Youth's Competitive Burning Belly

Loosely Inspired And Submitted To The Last Flame Challenge

By Marc OBrienPublished 24 days ago 1 min read

Planted on the reflective porch

A symbolic, flaming, burning torch

Lighting the relaxing scene

Illuminating golden gleam

While skating the local pond ice

Players combatting, very nice

Well into the dark

Trying to find the successful mark

Shooting towards a goal

Ignoring the cold

A red-light siren goes off

Signaling player, ‘start to cough’

On the other style side

Diplomatic needs try

When artistic competitors do their athletic best

Performing a own, designed choregraphed test

Hearing single clap

From coach saying, “wrap”

As all the children return to the porch

Each blowing, extinguishing the torch

They go inside

Following the nice try

Seeing the fire roaring

And parents pouring

Cocoa warmed with tremendous love

They all sit quietly, imitating peaceful doves

Watching flames do their seductive dance

Putting the youth into a tranquil trance

Knowing they all were outside playing a game

That could earn them fortune and fame

While others are prepared for tomorrow

Ready for the town celebrities to borrow

Answers when the quiz pops

Since the fun never stops

Until the Kleenex cleans up the little snots

social commentary

About the Creator

Marc OBrien

Barry University graduate Marc O'Brien has returned to Florida after a 17 year author residency in Las Vegas. He will continue using fiction as a way to distribute information. Books include "The Final Fence: Sophomores In The Saddle"

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