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Still Listening

trying to hear everything

By BrenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

i listened to my elders

i listened to my peers

i listened to the square heads

i listened to the queers

i listened to the madmen

i listened to the sane

if i ever missed something said

i listened once again

i listened to junkies lost in themselves

i listened to the clean and found

i listened to the many steps

of cures and hopes abound

i listened from the lofty heights

i listened from the gutter

i listened to many an elegant speech

and to an insignificant mutter

i listened to both left and right

the ups and down as well

i listened to the ocean once

she had a nautical tale to tell

i listened in the still of the night

i listened during the day

i listened to pretty much anyone

who had anything to say

never having much to say myself

i sat there, content to hear

i listened and i watched as well

to anything that was near

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About the Creator

Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

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  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    First listen. Learn the best way. Then act. Listening is always a good thing.

  • A beautiful tribute to all the wonderful listeners of the world!

  • Test3 years ago

    This is gorgeous. Beautiful rhythm and words.

  • J. R. Lowe3 years ago

    Now this is poetry. Strong message and great flow - would have been a perfect entry for the sensory poetry challenge too haha

  • What a beautiful picture. Being heard is priceless. I’m glad I was able to hear what you had to say

  • Kendall Defoe 3 years ago

    You made me listen...

  • That flows nicely Brenton. Great job.

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