Still Listening
trying to hear everything

i listened to my elders
i listened to my peers
i listened to the square heads
i listened to the queers
i listened to the madmen
i listened to the sane
if i ever missed something said
i listened once again
i listened to junkies lost in themselves
i listened to the clean and found
i listened to the many steps
of cures and hopes abound
i listened from the lofty heights
i listened from the gutter
i listened to many an elegant speech
and to an insignificant mutter
i listened to both left and right
the ups and down as well
i listened to the ocean once
she had a nautical tale to tell
i listened in the still of the night
i listened during the day
i listened to pretty much anyone
who had anything to say
never having much to say myself
i sat there, content to hear
i listened and i watched as well
to anything that was near
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Comments (8)
First listen. Learn the best way. Then act. Listening is always a good thing.
I like this flow. This is a good piece.
A beautiful tribute to all the wonderful listeners of the world!
This is gorgeous. Beautiful rhythm and words.
Now this is poetry. Strong message and great flow - would have been a perfect entry for the sensory poetry challenge too haha
What a beautiful picture. Being heard is priceless. I’m glad I was able to hear what you had to say
You made me listen...
That flows nicely Brenton. Great job.