Holding an urn empty of water
Waist covered with a flowing skirt
Bare-chested, showing her naked breasts off
Lichen-covered fountain out of service temporarily
Long moss-covered hair green with age
Ancient fountain guarding a spring garden
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Beautiful
Describes the pic perfectly. Well done.
She face expression seems like she's fed up with life hahaha. Loved your 6W6L!
Give it a couple more weeks & that garden area & statue will become a land flowing with milk & honey.