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Standing Alone

People always encourage you to be yourself, Until you become somebody with who they Dont Agree- HandsomelouiiThePoet

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Standing Alone
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Was I supposed

To listen

To my Uncle?

When He told me

Don't let these Dudes Sex you...

I should have listened

To my Mom, when she wouldn't

Hug me...

She enunciated

(Son Take that wig off, You look cute Tho)

There I was Standing alone,

Inside a world unknown...

I searched for Empathy and

I searched for Security...

I discoursed myself from outta Dark places...

I went to war with the Voices in my Head while searching for Sanity...

I Crossed paths with incompetent

Lovers.

Something told me that If

My heart keeps Pumping, then Don't give up!

I believed in a Bigger Dream, that only I could

See...

I set boundaries and Made a Promise,

That I will never forget to keep.

So many people are thinking that I am the same...

The one who tried to change, just to play the game.

I am No longer that little Boy,

Not anymore.

I Only accomplish what

I enjoy...

This is my life and you can't change it, but judge me if you like...

I will not be your stereotype and I hope that's alright!

People abuse you when they can not manipulate you...

People supervised me as I Flunked, but God Was prepared to Assemble me...

Motionless, I'm Standing sole with my chin up high!

So even if I May Cry, God can Wipe the Tears from my eyes🌈 through the sky!

STANDING ALONE

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  • Roy Stevens3 years ago

    I'm moved but I don't feel I have the right (or been down that same tough road) to comment much more. People disappoint out of their confused love for us. I wish we weren't so hard-wired to judge each other so often.

  • Test3 years ago

    This was an inspiring piece, thank you for being brave enough to share some of your personal journey! Your writing in this piece is breath taking and simply beautiful. The line that resinated with me most is "People abuse you when they can not manipulate you"... its so true on so many levels.

  • Susana's World3 years ago

    thank you Louii ... I could feel your journey.

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    💖👏

  • Ravishankar V K3 years ago

    Thank you for sharing your powerful and inspiring poem. I can feel the strength and conviction in your words, and the message you convey is truly uplifting. It takes courage to break away from stereotypes and pursue the path that you truly desire, and your poem beautifully captures that sentiment. I can feel your determination to live life on your own terms, and to not let anyone else dictate your choices or your future. The way you describe the challenges you've faced and the strength you've found in your faith is truly moving. It's clear that you have a strong sense of purpose and that you won't let anything stand in your way. Thank you for sharing this inspiring piece. Your words serve as a reminder to all of us that we have the power to shape our own destinies, and that with faith and determination, anything is possible.

  • Test3 years ago

    Powerful and moving, Louii. Only ever be yourself. Hugs 💕🙂

  • Wow, powerful 💕❤️

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Your poems always radiate with so much strength. ❤️ This is powerful and beautifully done!

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    This is so lovely, I almost cried. Well said for all of us, not just you Handsome, It is a beautiful heartfelt sigh. Exhale......

  • Gokila3 years ago

    Thoughtful content.

  • Quincy.V3 years ago

    This poem expresses a powerful message of self-acceptance and resilience in the face of adversity.

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