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Spring Rain

Falling

By Colleen WaltersPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read

The rain splashed down off the roof

and droplets tumbled from her eyelashes

as she stood in the aisle, hearing the rain

pelting the metal roof, tapping a

melodic rhythm into her head.

The heart called out and thought it heard

a reply, but it was just an echo.

She'd been fleetingly happy once, and a

memory spiraled upwards like a ribbon

until it floated out of sight.

She watched it disappear, and then

headed up to the house to make

some more coffee.

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““Do not remember the former things, Nor consider the things of old. Behold, I will do a new thing, Now it shall spring forth; Shall you not know it? I will even make a road in the wilderness And rivers in the desert.”

‭‭Isaiah‬ ‭43‬:‭18‬-‭19‬ ‭NKJV

nature poetryStream of Consciousness

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Colleen Walters

Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️

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  • T. Licht10 months ago

    ohhh! I love that sharp ending. Love the similes you used to describe the rain, Great Poem!

  • Shirley Belk10 months ago

    Always good food for thought :)

  • Some beautiful words and we always have to keep moving in one way or another

  • Andrea Corwin 10 months ago

    I really loved this line: memory spiraled upwards like a ribbon

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