
In the quiet chambers of a heart,
a hollow echo resonates—
the longing for a father,
a presence felt but never known.
Stories woven of shared traits
paint a portrait of a man
she could only touch through shadows
and the whispers of inherited traits.
Her childhood was a book with missing pages,
an unfinished tale of what might have been,
where dreams of connection danced like specters,
flickering at the edges of her solitude.
His voice was a distant melody,
lost in the mists of addiction,
a siren song that faded into the void.
Now, she carries the remnants of him,
a vial of ashes encased in a locket,
suspended over her heart like a forgotten relic.
It is a necklace of bittersweet memories,
a tangible fragment of a ghost she never truly met.
Each breath draws in the weight of unspoken words,
each heartbeat syncs with the pulse of loss.
The locket rests against her chest,
a miniature graveyard of hopes and shattered dreams,
its cold surface a touchstone for the love
she was never able to fully grasp.
In moments of solitude, she clasps it close,
feeling the ghost of his presence
seep through the delicate metal.
Her life is a mosaic of his absence,
each piece a reflection of the traits she was told she inherited,
a jigsaw of fragmented identity.
She walks through the world carrying his memory,
a silent testimony to the connection she yearned for,
the bond she hoped would materialize
in the interplay of fate and familial echoes.
And so, she holds him close,
his ashes mingling with her own breath,
a spectral dance of past and present,
a reminder that even in the void,
love can find a way to linger,
and the heart can keep the essence of those lost,
like a flame that never fully fades,
but burns quietly in the recesses of a soul.
About the Creator
Taylor Ward
From a small town, I find joy and grace in my trauma and difficulties. My life, shaped by loss and adversity, fuels my creativity. Each piece written over period in my life, one unlike the last. These words sometimes my only emotion.
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Comments (7)
The final image of the "flame that never fully fades" is both poignant and hopeful, suggesting that even in loss, love and memory can endure. This is a truly powerful and resonant piece.✨👍
This is painfully beautiful and heartbreaking. Thank you for sharing your heart and soul through this powerful poem. ❤️
Thank you for sharing. 🙏
Absolutely incredible.
Enjoyed it. Creatively done it.
What a wistful poem - it left me quite teary eyed.
Um just wow