Sonnet: Whisk(e)y in Absence of Love
a blanked-out fourteen-liner

come Whisk(e)y/Whisk(e)y in the absence of love
you’ve now been burned and burnished to perfection
in your charred walls of barrel-rested slumber
taking years of maturation to be drammed
you take away this angst for translation to
mirth past hours of wasted sighs and broken thoughts
that lovesick nerves produce/ producing laughter
which robs all my reason by blur of shadows.
yet your Taste of sucralized grainmash beckons
as seductively/ tastes as bitter as love—:
fit beverage for consumption by the grainpig
whose Whisk(e)y has been called the Water of Life/
firewater spirit while alive on the breath/
come then /Whisk(e)y\ to me! in absence of love
About the Creator
Rob Angeli
sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt
There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.
-Virgil Aeneid I.462
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