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Sonnet: Whisk(e)y in Absence of Love

a blanked-out fourteen-liner

By Rob AngeliPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
On the rocks?

come Whisk(e)y/Whisk(e)y in the absence of love

you’ve now been burned and burnished to perfection

in your charred walls of barrel-rested slumber

taking years of maturation to be drammed

you take away this angst for translation to

mirth past hours of wasted sighs and broken thoughts

that lovesick nerves produce/ producing laughter

which robs all my reason by blur of shadows.

yet your Taste of sucralized grainmash beckons

as seductively/ tastes as bitter as love—:

fit beverage for consumption by the grainpig

whose Whisk(e)y has been called the Water of Life/

firewater spirit while alive on the breath/

come then /Whisk(e)y\ to me! in absence of love

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About the Creator

Rob Angeli

sunt lacrimae rerum et mentem mortalia tangunt

There are tears of things, and mortal objects touch the mind.

-Virgil Aeneid I.462

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