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song of the early rise

a poem

By Dane BHPublished about a year ago 1 min read
song of the early rise
Photo by Keagan Henman on Unsplash

the early light sings

a silver prelude

to morning,

the crepuscular breath

before the sun calls reveille.

the gift of the clock's turn back

is this hour:

a ground littered

with starfall;

mist pouring off the river

like an exhale;

a tree that looks ready

for the ball.

grass beneath my rubber soles

goes crunch – stomp – crunch

as I pant dragon’s breath

into the untouched quiet.

the sun will come

like trumpets,

and beneath its power,

all this glitter will vanish

like breath in a brisk morning.

you won’t believe me

when I tell you:

I danced on diamonds

before you woke up.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Dane BH

By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.

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  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Beautiful poem. Well Done!!!

  • Natalie Wilkinsonabout a year ago

    Beautiful, Dane.

  • I believe you, I believe you! So beautiful and vivid. <3

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