the early light sings
a silver prelude
to morning,
the crepuscular breath
before the sun calls reveille.
the gift of the clock's turn back
is this hour:
a ground littered
with starfall;
mist pouring off the river
like an exhale;
a tree that looks ready
for the ball.
grass beneath my rubber soles
goes crunch – stomp – crunch
as I pant dragon’s breath
into the untouched quiet.
the sun will come
like trumpets,
and beneath its power,
all this glitter will vanish
like breath in a brisk morning.
you won’t believe me
when I tell you:
I danced on diamonds
before you woke up.
About the Creator
Dane BH
By day, I'm a cog in the nonprofit machine, and poet. By night, I'm a creature of the internet. My soul is a grumpy cat who'd rather be sleeping.
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Comments (3)
Beautiful poem. Well Done!!!
Beautiful, Dane.
I believe you, I believe you! So beautiful and vivid. <3