Son Light
Sunlight tenderly caresses
the edges of your form,
silhouetting
your supreme innocence
against grass, tree,
pavement, sky,
ocean, highway.
Could that resplendent
and terrible world
you've begun to explore
corrupt or dampen
the sublime sight before me?
Lore we
have compiled
during our burgeoning
modernity
suggests that one day,
your wonder must wither.
Your mother's and mine, obliterated
over time,
we began to rebuild
when we saw you.
I draw you closer,
huddled near the flame —
Summer came
and went, as if ashamed
of herself this year.
But as I feel
your tiny heart beating,
I am assured —
the world
has never known such warmth
as this.
The song in you,
though still building
its opening measures,
is so dear a treasure
that your audience
has already commenced
crowding the concert hall.
We've taken our seats,
enthralled
by the symphony
of your growth.
It is no small
thing, this oath
of parenthood.
Let this be my testimony:
my child, alone, he
could calm the thunder
beneath the mountains.
And that wonder?
The magic of his youth?
That,
I will defend
with my very life.
Son, Light, you are loved.
About the Creator
Jacob Sherman
The desire to read, and perhaps to write, should be cultivated and nurtured with care throughout every stage of life. For my part I will inject what strangeness and truth that I can into our written history. Expect no constants but honesty.
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A real eulogy for the writer’s son. It shows genuine proudness, persistence, and perspicaciousness. Well done and thanks for sharing!