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My Mariana Trench depression
And your shallow, petty delight
Slowly transformed into my
Cold set of armour and
The softened heart found
Hidden beneath
But still with
A slow
Beat
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Poppy
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Your cover images are amazing! Almost as amazing as your poetry "My Mariana Trench depression And your shallow, petty delight" these lines were so unbelievably profound! There's no light in the trench, and no depth in the shallows
Such dynamic lines! This had outstanding progression which is hard to do with diminishing syllables per line
So visual! Poignant and deep - great job!👏 👏👏
You have no right being this amazing. "My Mariana Trench depression", took my breath away and if I kept pulling out quotes, I'd just type out your whole poem. Absolutely breathtaking and splendid to read as always!
This is beautiful - caught my eye with the first line, Vocal was doing something calling this story to me early AM while sunbathing - thanks for sharing Poppy and hope all is well with you ❤️
I like the contrast in the first few lines and the resilience at the end. Slow and steady wins the race.
This had so much of resilience to it. I loved it!
This had so much of resilience to it. I loved it!
Excellent nonet! I especially love the contrast of: "My Mariana Trench depression And your shallow, petty delight"
Heartfelt and relatable