Soft sky, infinite
Sky-ku Challenge _Haiku-poem by Maryam Batool_
Rainbow behind Gull
Enchanting view appeals eye
Soft sky, infinite
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Maryam Batool
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I'm a storyteller who loves poems, fiction, and romance. Creativity is my constant companion. I take joy in turning thoughts into worlds. Writing is my way of exploring life and connecting with others
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'20/20'
"Do It Again" the track that would ultimately open the Beach Boys final album on Capitol Records which was released on February 10th 1969 had originally been released as a single in August of 1968. The track was the first of many post-Pet Sounds era throwbacks to the early Beach Boys sound which would become continually more cliched and eventually lead the Beach Boys to the level of self-parody they would eventually succumb to in the 1980s while their closest contemporaries The Beatles nearing the end of their run in 1969 would go on to be viewed as the most influential band of all time. However, the song itself is not bad on its surface, and it opens with a futuristic sounding (for 1969) drumbeat captured by then-Beach Boys engineer Stephen Desper using tape delays on the drums performed by Dennis Wilson and John Guerin. The song has been re-recorded numerous times over the years on various Beach Boys-related projects most notably the 2011 re-recording at Capitol studios featuring the five surviving Beach Boys at the time backed instrumentally by various members of both the Brian Wilson Band and Mike Loves touring "Beach Boys" to promote the then upcoming Beach Boys 50th Anniversary reunion tour in 2012. The hammering and power drill sound at the end of the song was an excerpt from a track called "Workshop" that was to be a part of the uncompleted "SMiLE" album.
By Sean Callaghan8 days ago in Beat
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So calming and beautiful.
This haiku paints a serene and beautiful picture. The imagery of a rainbow behind a gull, set against a soft, infinite sky, is simply stunning. The brevity of the poem allows the reader to linger on the image, savoring its beauty. A true masterpiece of haiku form!
so peaceful and calming. Love how it captures the magic of nature in so few words! 🌈🕊️ You are an amazing writer Maryam❤️
I can feel the breeze when reading this, so calming. Your choice to end the first line with ‘gull’ was very clever, it fits so well. I kept repeating that first line, it sounded so pretty and easy on the tongue. ~Soft sky, infinite~ was the icing on the cake. A soft drop from on high like the Gull searching where to land. A very impressive piece 👌🏽
Beautiful haiku! Love it!
Ohh! My dear sister That's a beautiful haiku! It captures a serene and vivid image. And Oh! Wow, you’ve taken a vocal+ membership! Congratulations! The haiku is also wonderful.💥💫😌👏