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Soft Asphalt When I Breathe

At the edge of holding on

By Gabriela Trofin-TatárPublished 4 months ago 1 min read
Soft Asphalt When I Breathe
Photo by 兆航 樊 on Unsplash

The soft asphalt narrows,

sharp as a knife held tight between fingers, a breath held for life,

Sun setting low, beneath the hills, long shadows wavering through ancient trees

I notice my fingers tightening on the wheel,

My Garmin watch says breathe, tells me that stress is high,

How could it not be?

The world tilts forward, my heart splits,

I see the curve, I hear a crack of whisper,

My foot is searching wildly for the brakes,

I see the drop, but from the outside of myself,

Do I just stop in air? Do I let go of holding tight?

The sun tilts, and the horizon bends into the unknown,

My last words "just breathe!"

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About the Creator

Gabriela Trofin-Tatár

Passionate about tech, studying Modern Journalism at NYU, and mother of 3 littles. Curious, bookaholic and travel addict. I also write on Medium and Substack: https://medium.com/@chicachiflada & https://chicachiflada.substack.com/

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran4 months ago

    Sometimes we need to pause and breath. Take things slowly. Loved your poem!

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