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So Right

First Time

By Barb DukemanPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
So Right
Photo by Sebastien Gabriel on Unsplash

Ringing in my ears,

My vacant stare

Fall into your eyes of Sky.

My Browns find your face,

A Gentle word from you,

Reply, breathless, from me.

My soul left me,

And landed somewhere

near your heart.

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Barb Dukeman

I have three books published on Amazon if you want to read more. I have shorter pieces (less than 600 words at https://barbdukeman.substack.com/. Subscribe today if you like what you read here or just say Hi.

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  • Gregory Payton11 months ago

    My soul left me and landed somewhere near your heart. Absolutely beautiful!! Well Done!!!

  • L.I.E11 months ago

    ❤️❤️❤️

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