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So High

not high enough

By Andrei Z.Published about a year ago 1 min read
So High
Photo by Daniel Hodgkins on Unsplash

the bird flew so high

oh so high she flew until

the gun shot her down

Senryu

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Andrei Z.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    This was kind of sad, but very real life, love the unexpected twist.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Well that was heartbreaking.... I was expecting a different kind of high from you! 😅

  • Mackenzie Davisabout a year ago

    Ah! What a great metaphor you have created. A perfect haiku.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    No! Such a metaphor as well as a literal tragedy.

  • Matthew J. Frommabout a year ago

    a modern Icarus. great entry.

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