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In the wonderland

By chaimaa alidrissiPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Like a galerie of pretty paintings each relate to every piece in their own way sometimes it’s guilt sometimes it’s love and some other times sadness and sorrow …

In shadows deep, my heart once bloomed,

For one I thought so pure, so true.

With trust in hand, to him I swooned,

Yet darkness hid within his view.

I cherished him, with kindness rare,

My soul laid bare, for him to see.

But cruel words, behind my back,

Revealed the lies he spoke of me.

In whispers cold, my name he smeared,

A venomous tongue, so sharp, so sly.

The hurt he dealt, through tears and jeers,

Left scars beneath a weeping sky.

I gave him love, he gave me pain,

A hollow shell, of broken dreams.

Now shadows dance where light once reigned,

And trust is shattered, torn at seams.

In the echo of his cruel deceit,

My heart lies silent, bruised and lost.

A lesson learned, in darkness deep,

Of love misplaced, and bitter cost

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About the Creator

chaimaa alidrissi

a poet who’s language is expressing emotions through rhyming words 🤎

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Joseph Anthony2 years ago

    Love can be like a drug.

  • Joseph Anthony2 years ago

    Yes, the art are the letters that form all the perfect words we find to fill pages.

  • angela hepworth2 years ago

    So powerful and strongly worded.

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