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Snorkel

For the Unfiltered Challenge

By Penny FullerPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Snorkel
Photo by Jakob Owens on Unsplash

Am I

burning?

my shirt

white with

UPS?

not SPF

dive down

hold breath

heels chafe when

kicking

glad there are

flip-flops on

the boat

something on

sand

go slow

don’t kick up

cloud with

fins

trash?

treasure?

half buried so

hard to see

up-

blow hard through

snorkel-

breath-

rest-

down

coral loses

color in

blue depths

need a light

streamers say

red filter

wonder if

Amazon

delivers to

hotel

shadow in

periphery

turtle?

shark?

brother?

swivel

fins catch

reef

silver-yellow

flashes

scatter

can’t use

handrail

to steady

water slows

still off

balance

up-

blow hard through

snorkel-

breath-

rest-

down-

deeper

muffled engine

above

stay low

boat shadow

overhead

not ours

anchor line

still there

up-

blow hard through

snorkel-

breath-

rest-

mask up-

boat crew on

stern- no

snorkelers

back

move shallow where

sun penetrates

to seafloor

keep breathing- stay

horizontal

own

shadow flexes

on sand

rocks

darkens orange-

fingered

growths

mask up-

crew calling time

come have

rum punch

on

return ride

chin up

swimming back

hot sun already

drying

rime

into bleaching

hair.

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Penny Fuller

(Not my real name)- Other Labels include:

Lover of fiction writing and reading. Aspiring global nomad. Woman in science. Most at home in nature. Working my way to an unconventional life, story by story and poem by poem.

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  • Angie the Archivist 📚🪶about a year ago

    A delightful poem… it made me wish I was snorkelling & lolling in the ocean.😊 Happy New Year! Looking forward to reading more of your poems.✅

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    This was an immersive experience! Excellent work, Penny!

  • Jamye Sharpabout a year ago

    I enjoy the subtleness of silence underwater in the short clips of description and thoughts.

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh, I had a lot of rum punch on my honeymoon when we went snorkeling!! This was a great :) I loved the 'wonder if amazon delivers to the hotel' part, ha!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    I was there with you. We had a great time. Rum punch all round!

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