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Smoke & Mirrors

For Poppy's Prompts #10

By Sarah LennPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Photo by Tomas Andreopoulos on Pexels

You handed me the darts

spun me around blindfolded

like a childhood piñata challenge

or a pin the tail on the donkey

I thought it was exhilarating at first

playing your games

attempting to aim true despite the

dizzying sensation of walking

on the ceiling holding a mirror

count to 10

hide and seek

ready or not here I come

I didn't notice the splinters until later

or maybe I didn't mind them so much

distracted, as I was

by your waving of the key to your heart

your smile infiltrating

during a sleight-of-hand trick

I had years of an attention drought

before you spoke of Fate and Future

faking

slipping lyrics into existing songs

and calling them your own

it wasn't until I sat down

awareness of feathered bolts protruding from

my shredded chest

that I realized it had all been

smoke and mirrors

heartbreak

About the Creator

Sarah Lenn

Using writing as a way to capture snapshots of emotion on a screen whilst life happens. And life has thrown me some curve balls. Always striving to find a path through the chaos...

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  • T. Licht10 months ago

    adding those carnival games into this serious poem gives me those creeps like a scary clown. Love this poem!

  • This was so poignant, emotional and relatable. Loved your poem!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    Yeah. What Poppy said. Using childhood games is so evocative! And conjuring with slight-of-hand & smoke and mirrors appeals to the amateur magician in me. Magical! ⚡♥️⚡

  • Poppy about a year ago

    Oooh I adore this start from finish! 'spun me around blindfolded like a childhood piñata challenge or a pin the tail on the donkey' That was such an incredibly impactful metaphor! There were so many amazing lines I can't list them all. Really well done!

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