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Slipping Below the Surface

A poem by Lena. Form created along the way.

By Lena BeanaPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
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Author's Note: The following is the 7th poem in my self-challenge to write a poem a day. 

Click here for the first poem in this challenge. Thank you for reading and wish me luck to keep the pace ❤

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Fighting

The currents

That pull me down.

Below the surface, 

I slip.

*

I can't

Swim against

The currents that 

Pull me farther out - 

Slipping.

*

Ceaselessly,

Treading the water

That threatens to claim me.

Fighting.

*

Barely,

I hold out

Against the currents,

Keeping up the pace.

*

But I can't keep 

Swimming against

These currents that threaten,

Pulling me farther away

From solid ground.

*

Beneath my feet - 

The abyss.

*

Endlessly,

Treading the water

That threatens to claim me.

*

Swimming

Against the currents

That threaten 

To pull me farther out.

*

Only occasionally - 

Slipping below the surface.

***

© Lena Folkert 2022

Originally published on Medium

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Author's Note: Thank you for honoring me with a read. If you've enjoyed what you've read, please click on the 🖤 and explore my other work. All reads and comments feed my writer's soul and give me the fuel to keep sitting down at my computer to bleed out words.

Xx - Lena

sad poetry

About the Creator

Lena Beana

Alaskan Grown Freelance Writer 🤍 Lover of Prose

Former Deckhand & Barista 🤍 Always a Pleaser & Eggshell-Walker

Lifelong Animal Lover & Whisperer 🤍 Ever the Student & Seeker

Traveler 🤍 Dreamer 🤍 Wanderer

Forever Lost 🤍

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  • Mike Singleton 💜 Mikeydred 4 years ago

    I keep missing the Vocal poems , as always brilliant heartfelt writing

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