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Midnight awaken
Warm room sudden chill descend
Cold breath ear caress
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Raymond G. Taylor
Author living in Kent, England. Writer of short stories and poems in a wide range of genres, forms and styles. A non-fiction writer for 40+ years. Subjects include art, history, science, business, law, and the human condition.
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Comments (7)
Well-wrought! That moment between dream and waking, did the voice come from my mind... or the room?
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Nicely executed, Ray! I felt the unease.
Such an eerie little snapshot in just three lines. I can almost feel the chill.
This haiku captures a chilling moment with minimalist precision. The contrast between warmth and sudden cold perfectly evokes that eerie, half-awake feeling.
I will just die if that happens to me, lol. Loved this!
I hope it’s not a ghost. Great haiku, Raymond!