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Silent House

A Paradelle poem

By Fathi JalilPublished 21 days ago 1 min read
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Silence grips the soul; no voice is heard

Silence grips the soul; no voice is heard

The door closed tight; night shadows creep

The door closed tight; night shadows creep

Night shadows creep; no voice is heard

Silence grips the soul; the door closed tight

~

Dust thickens upon the old table

Dust thickens upon the old table

Old memories lost; carried by passing wind

Old memories lost; carried by passing wind

Old memories lost upon the old table

Dust thickens carried by passing wind

~

Dim light awaits the owner's return

Dim light awaits the owner's return

Longing visits; this heart feels empty

Longing visits; this heart feels empty

Dim light awaits; longing visits this

Heart feels empty; the owner's return

~

Silence grips the soul; this heart feels empty

Dim light awaits the owner's return

The door closed tight; no voice is heard

Night shadows creep upon the old table

Dust thickens; old memories lost; carried by passing wind

Longing visits

~

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About the Creator

Fathi Jalil

I’m a writer who loves sharing stories and making connections. Along the way, I learned how to make writing work for me. Now, I share what I’ve learned so others can too.

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  • Denise E Lindquist20 days ago

    Wow! I love it! Haven't heard of this poetry format before. Thank you for sharing!❤️

  • Oooo, I especially loved the chant-like repeating lines!

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