
Silence grips the soul; no voice is heard
Silence grips the soul; no voice is heard
The door closed tight; night shadows creep
The door closed tight; night shadows creep
Night shadows creep; no voice is heard
Silence grips the soul; the door closed tight
~
Dust thickens upon the old table
Dust thickens upon the old table
Old memories lost; carried by passing wind
Old memories lost; carried by passing wind
Old memories lost upon the old table
Dust thickens carried by passing wind
~
Dim light awaits the owner's return
Dim light awaits the owner's return
Longing visits; this heart feels empty
Longing visits; this heart feels empty
Dim light awaits; longing visits this
Heart feels empty; the owner's return
~
Silence grips the soul; this heart feels empty
Dim light awaits the owner's return
The door closed tight; no voice is heard
Night shadows creep upon the old table
Dust thickens; old memories lost; carried by passing wind
Longing visits
~
About the Creator
Fathi Jalil
I’m a writer who loves sharing stories and making connections. Along the way, I learned how to make writing work for me. Now, I share what I’ve learned so others can too.



Comments (2)
Wow! I love it! Haven't heard of this poetry format before. Thank you for sharing!❤️
Oooo, I especially loved the chant-like repeating lines!