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I used to marinate myself in emotion
Now I sit here numb
It’s not that bad really
Just strange
Feels like all has drained from my brain
I spent so long trapped in my pain
It was hard to see the sun through the rain
Some days feel like I’ve lost my wind
The tension is unwound
The wound is closing
But I feel lost
Voiceless
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Yes very relatable. Great ideas atomic! 👍😊
Very nicely done.
I loved the first line, so authentic and relatable! "I used to marinate myself in emotion."
Amazing