She Was the Storm, Not the Broken Girl in the Rain
You thought she was falling apart, she was becoming a force.

She was the storm,
Not the broken girl in the rain.
You saw mascara running down her face
And thought she was weak.
But that was war paint,
Not surrender.
She wasn't crying because she missed you.
She was crying because she remembered who she was
And it hurt to realize
She gave that version up for you.
You mistook silence for defeat.
But have you ever seen lightning apologize
Before it strikes?
She walked away,
Not because she couldn’t stay,
But because staying would have meant
Abandoning the revolution inside her bones.
She was always thunder in soft skin,
A wild spirit taught to whisper,
A volcano told to simmer,
A goddess tricked into kneeling
For someone who couldn’t even look her in the eye
When she broke.
She wasn’t asking to be saved.
She was waiting for the moment
She could set herself on fire
Without burning for anyone else.
You underestimated the woman
Who builds herself back
From ashes.
You thought the rain would drown her,
But she became the rain
Unstoppable. Cleansing. Free.
She is the storm.
Not your storm to run from.
Not your storm to claim.
Not your storm to silence.
She is the breaking and the becoming.
The grief and the rising.
The scream you were never brave enough to let out.
The truth you choked on for years.
She doesn't want you back.
She doesn't need revenge.
She just wants peace,
And that’s what makes her dangerous.
She was always too much
For the ones who couldn’t hold their own shadows.
Too deep
For the ones who only knew how to skim.
Now she writes poetry with the pain you left,
Turns her bruises into ink,
And her scars into signatures.
She’s not broken.
She’s reborn.
And you…
You’re just a footnote
In the story of her resurrection.
So next time you see her in the rain,
Don’t offer an umbrella.
Offer silence.
And watch her storm walk away.
About the Creator
Zanele Nyembe
For the ones who stay strong in silence—I see you. I write what others are afraid to say out loud. If you've ever felt invisible, abandoned, or quietly powerful, this space is yours.

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