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She Wakes

Then Closes Her Eyes

By Colleen Millsteed Published 5 years ago Updated 4 years ago 1 min read
She Wakes
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A young woman wakes each morning

Then closes her eyes once more,

She tries her hardest to go back to sleep

What has she got to wake for?

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Try as she might sleep eludes her

So she lays there trying to find a way,

To drag herself up out of bed

And find the strength to face the day.

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Once out she takes a look around her

And if she wasn't depressed before, she is now,

What has she got to highlight her day

The dishes, the cleaning,.......oh wow!!!

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You ask how I know what she's feeling

How could I possibly see?

Well the answer to that is simple

Because that young woman is me!!!

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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