she she didn’t didn’t like like to to repeat re p e a t R E p E a T Herself.
Forgotten Memories
she she didn’t didn’t like like to to repeat re p e a t R E p E a T
Herself.
Saying it
(Once)
Was enough
- “NO”
- “NO
- “Noooo
H it t ing th e gr ou n D
with palms sanding asphalt
Metallic taste o n li p s
Soul revolting
FACE ECAF reflecting
In his stoic eyes
Mind SCREAMINGGGGGGGGGGGG
But voice gone
F l a t
And
Silent
She will not end ]
here
she she didn’t didn’t like like to to repeat re p e a t R E p E a T
Herself.
She should not have to ever repeat
Herself.
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Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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Rachel Reviews: The Spiral Archive by Pieter Hendrik
It's difficult for me to know where to start with a review of this book as it was, for me, an entirely unique experience and one that I'll probably never have again. I don't want that to be interpreted as unenjoyable but it has left me scratching my head a little and ruminating on its content, its themes and its characters.
By Rachel Deemingabout 6 hours ago in BookClub
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Whoa, the line between “NO” and “she will not end” gave me literal chills 😬
So powerful.